Song writing.
For almost 3 years, I was asking around for some to compose music for my poems, but never got any serious reply. So I have taken up the task myself. The reason I got the guitar and eventually ended up here at Justin Guitar. So lets get to work
I never had a problem with song writing as such. They come flowing when ever they want.
In this sense, I will not be able to provide any help to others in this regard.
I have used an online tool to help a bit with the rhymes, but in general , they just came like crazy and I had to be quick to write them down, else they were lost for me, unable to recall them.
The online tool is called: rhymezone - Really cool little thingy.
Also via that I learned some slang words and got deeper into English. I prefer solely to use British English but as itâs my second language, I might go wrong here and there and use US English.
Also I can use that tool, in case I need to change some words here and there to make the music fit. But I hope, I will be able to change the music, so it fits with the poems as they are.
My issue now, is to compose some music that goes with the poems. How to go about it?
I think I will spend some time and see if I can find some good videos or text, that can give me some hints. Itâs gonna be a totally new experience for me.
I already have posted one poem. Here is a couple of others. I might just try out one verse first or what ever comes. I guess when first getting into it, it might start flowing all by itself. Thatâs at least the impression I get when listening to all those bands and other song writers. Many of them had help from others in the band or around, but also many have done it 100% on their own.
I will go with these 2 poems first and see if I can come up with something:
No, I was never a Choo-Choo man, no clue how that came about
I once was a Choo-Choo Man
I was a choo-choo man and always had a dream to change
Despite being told it is impossible to rearrange
It came to mind that I have been living in one big lie
Full of disturbing emotions and blinkers for the eye
Everyday I went to work to drive the choo-choo
Liked by all and no one thought I was ku-ku
As long I fakely smiled and held the proper line
Stupidly and narrow-minded and all would be fine
As I suddenly change and become creative
Or sit for hours and look speculative
Many people get confused, run screaming away and think
That I quickly as possible should go to a shrink
Changing attitude and working with the mind
In order to become more wise and more kind
Many think I have gone crazy or just want to abuse
Notice so many weird kind of hidden accuse
When I look at others with my level
Itâs all in my mind wether I see an angel or a devil
I shouldnât judge what others do, say or think
It could actually be me who are on the brink
So since we all run around deaf and blind
Wouldnât it be wiser and way more kind
If we open-minded and kindly together
Helped ourself and others free of the tether
If I tightly and dearly hold on to the past
Itâs impossible to change the mind smoothly and fast
If I think and see everything as impure
Itâs like my mind is drowning in a pile of manure
If I always are worried what others think
I would be constantly insecure and on the brink
I donât want to follow narrow-minded views and stupid desire
I want to find and awaken the original fire
All go uneasy and worry if I act different than I usually do
What they want is just for me to drive the same boring choo-choo
Hold the narrow line strict and proper
Despite itâs all fake and one big whopper
By Kim Lodro Dawa, 8th January 2018
A poem I wrote in response to a good friend who asked me some questions:
Building a fence
Setting up the fence very strong,
Building it tall and very long,
It really never will be enough,
As the maras are very tough,
The fence will cover the inner glow,
Preventing from going with the flow,
Pleasing others will keep you in the tether,
As on a windy day like a lonely feather,
Like a dog sniffing in others trail,
Is a sure way for the mind to fail,
Whether you are with friends or foes,
Others feet are always with smelly toes,
Ego will hold you down very tight,
Just look at it without a fight,
Since there is nothing there to see,
Then just laugh and let it be,
by Kim Lodrö Dawa - 24th March 2019
Half my poems I will not show on here, as they are not that family friendly. They are pretty hardcore. Those from 2016 and 2017 was during my mental breakthrough. In general my experiences and such shines through. I also have a love poem and stuff like that. Of course a love poem, but not really having the strong feeling I had that time, so might be difficult or even impossible. But these two and others, they are still with the same power, also the poem further up the thread âA whittler in da Hoodâ - But that one was in connection with some special events, so want more experience before taking on that task.
You are welcome to use them and give them other words, make changes or what ever. They are free for all to use. As said before if being used and changes are made, itâs all yours. If they are exact copy, then write the source. I donât want credit or go into any copyright thingy. Just so people know the source. Itâs always good to know the source. Any suggestions are welcome, links to videos or what ever. But else. Let the process begin