Truly commendable effort Stefan.
Space and room to breathe … that is the standout for me. You don’t rush or snatch or play endless flurries of notes. You have a melodic sensibility.
As people have already noted, your bends are not hitting the mark, work on that as a separate exercise to improve the intonation of your bends.
Try to bring in a little variation in terms of the length of your phrases. Think in sentences … How to play a solo ... think in sentences
Take control of your guitar and fx controls. Move from bridge pickup to neck pickup for tonal variety across such a long track. Set your amp and fx to be quite overdriven and gritty with your guitar volume at 10. Then, back your guitar volume off, down to about 5. That will clean it up. You then have space to up the volume, increase the dirt in the tone, and back it off again. Some reverb would make it shimmer.
Keep it up. It is great fun too. 