I posted a sketch of this a few months back here This is a fleshed out version with doubled rhythm guitars, a bass track from my friend Jim O’Connor (The O’Collective on YT) and some actual effort at a decent mix.
My thanks to everyone who listed to the initial version, especially for the feedback I received.
Short and sweet. I like it. I think there is still something off with your mix. The levels are there and the sound but the stereo is messed up. It sounds like a demo tape, which isn’t inherently bad, but probably not what you’re looking for.
The song is solid though.
You may well be right. I don’t claim to have serious mixing skills; I’m a bit too impatient. There’s not really a lot of stereo beyond the panned rhythm guitars and what EZD3 brings to the drums. I’m glad you think the song is solid. It started as just an exercise playing with EZD3 and took on a bigger life. But it reached a point where I wanted to move on, so I declared victory. 