Anyone in for a beginner songwriting challenge?

ā€¦ and theyā€™re off!
Godspeed and good luck to you all! :smiley::tada::confetti_ball:

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I would be so up for this! But it seems I will be occupied with another ā€œcollabā€ quite soon. :rofl:

Nevertheless, if time allows, I will chime in. Have fun everybody!

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Hmmmā€¦ We can of course also work on good night songs :baby: :baby_bottle: :zzz:

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Been there and done thatā€¦ although it might be a little advanced for a newborn :rofl:

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It might be a bit :slightly_smiling_face: That was brilliant, Brian. I have to admit, it even beats those militant armed cows ā€¦

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Cheers, Nicole, Iā€™m sure my psychiatrist wife would help to pick up any broken pieces :wink:
Old-fashioned ā€˜vibesā€™ to you, @Richard_close2u, for creating this collab/meeting place :+1:
(one day weā€™re gonna resurrect that ā€˜gloves-off/honest criticismā€™ room too? :laughing:)

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Another great example of a Good night song :slight_smile: but in german!
Lisa, you probably know this one and wonā€™t be playing it to your child in the next few years, I expect!

Brian, you did those schwyzerdĆ¼tsch covers very well, so I assume you speak german - or did you just replicate the sound - it sounded too good for the latter, I think!

Iā€™m really exhausted today and have quite a hard day tomorrow, from very early to pretty late, but Iā€™m keen that we bring the matter forward in the nearest possible future! :slight_smile:

Best wishes,
Dominique

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I didnā€™t mean to come across as directorial and shooing people away from a public topic.
Sorry if it came across that way.
I simply thought that once some people had found each other for Dominiqueā€™s project, the actual nitty-gritty details would then become something you continue yourselves.
:slight_smile:

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What a great topic, Dominique.
Iā€™d love to participate in something like that. Donā€™t really know how and what and all, but itā€™s the same for everyone at first, I think.

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Fantastic example of a song, where lyrics are used to counter the music, making this little horror song all the more intriguing :sunglasses:

Hmmā€¦ I agree with Richard that at some point group or smaller group DMs might be the way to go. Otherwise - at the latest, when we are really starting to work on various songs - things might become confusing and tedious, not only for people reading along but also for people working together at various songs :slightly_smiling_face:

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My Germanā€™s rusty but functional, albeit with an ā€˜urchigā€™ CH-twang :laughing:

The forum is a great way to find like-minded folk to hook up. But once thatā€™s occurred, DMs (1-1 or in groups) are the way to go, till we get to hear the fruits of your labours :smiley:

I understand where you are coming from Richard, in the community letā€™s think about it, then off to the workshop prep play enjoy and build, then back to the community with our number one hit cheers HEC :+1: :guitar:

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The fruits of our labours? Weā€™ll keep them in our DMs!
But youā€™ll later hear them in the radio! :wink:

But what if Brian is listening to a different radio station or doesnā€™t listen to the radio at all?

Dearā€¦ everyone who replied, I still owe you some answersā€¦

Thank you Brian for all your input and motivation! Yes, I had found Richardā€™s post, but planned to read it to the full extent later, as it was quite long! :grinning: And I liked your collaboration on this and at least two more collabsā€¦ what a songwriting and performing workhorse you are :grinning:

Thanks a lot, Toby! Your hint bore fruit! :heart:

I was thinking about delaying itā€¦ in the meantime, it seems like most are keen to start. But if we start without you, and it wonā€™t be a total letdown. Iā€™m sure Iā€™ll be up for another round of the same or something similar very soon anyway. You wonā€™t miss out!

Fantastic! I read all your messages and sent you a private message (aka PM aka DM).

Well, if you donā€™t feel like songwriting at the moment, ok - itā€™s important to have some motivation so it makes sense. But skill level? - in terms of guitar playing and singing, your ā€œRocket Manā€ is very very good - wow!

I think we will be able to manage it! And Iā€™m happy youā€™re coming too!

Oh, itā€™s not on me to decide, itā€™s just a proposition and Iā€™m happy if you join!
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so you can work together with someone who has more musical ideas than strength in lyrics writing. (like me for example) At least thatā€™s what I think could work.

Great to hear! Iā€™m quite sure it wonā€™t be the last opportunity! All fingers crossed for your collab!
(I had first written ā€œthumbs crossedā€, but that sounded odd :grinning: )

Well, yes, Iā€™m happy for eveyrone who joins! Great to have you!

haha, yes, could be, but wonā€™t the songs be played on all stations? :wink:

Iā€™ll post an update tomorrow and then, we can bring the thing forward together.
All the best, for me itā€™s goodnight,
Dominique

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Thanks for checking it out Dom, appreciate your thoughts :+1:

Hello again,

something I wanted to stateā€¦

About songwriting:

Iā€™ve read a bit about songwriting and found a few videos I liked. I canā€™t call myself knowledgeable, but a few facts / statements I liked were:

The average person will write bad songs at first. Becauseā€¦
You listened to quite a lot of music and your taste is well developed .
Your song writing skiills in the beginning arenā€™t! So you canā€™t yet produce anything up to your listening standards. Itā€™s normal.
Someone stated 10 to 20 bad songs before a ā€œkeeperā€, Justin stated ā€œdozensā€ if I remember well.

Lennon/McCartney wrote 200 songs in 8 years
and 20 number one songs Thatā€™s 10% !!!
From what I read they wrote rather bad ones before meeting, while not very many it seems.

But most successful songwriters took their time too and admit they wrote lots of songs at the start they were not proud of later on.

So, donā€™t expect too much from your first tries, and I canā€™t guide anyone, unfortunately. My personal intent is to just start and tackle the first 10 or 20 bad ones rather soon, in order to get something hopefully better at one point in my life, rather than never! Well, but still to have fun along the way! It will be like guitar playing. The first steps are hard!

Some advice that made sense to me was like:

  • Write a lot of songs
  • Work hard on good ideas
  • Work fast on average ideas (so you get that number of required ā€œbadā€ songs needed up :slight_smile: )
  • Learn the tools* of the craft

*There are lots of tools and excercises that can help in the process, maybe Iā€™ll link something and certainly some of you have sources to share too. Maybe it would make sense to start a thread with advice and tools refered to songwriting?

Sorry for the babble, I needed to get this out! I hope I couldnā€™t demotivate too many!

Update soon, and every input very welcome,
Dominique

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How to write a song? :rofl:

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Relevant insights.

According to Dave Grohl however, itā€™s all about the chorusā€¦ :smiley:

Gotta start somewhere !