Hi Sachiv, that’s a nice improv. Unfortunately I couldn’t hear the BT on my phone but I’m sure you were in the pocket!
Nice one.
Keep up the good work!!
Sachiv, some cool playing there.
From a playing perspective, one thing to consider is more use of the pause between phrases and lines. You probably heard Justin use the words and sentences metaphor. So your solo tells a story by combining words into sentences, and sentences into a paragraph. And just like in speaking, the pauses are improtant to allow the listener to enjoy what you have to say.
From a recording perspective, next time turn up the backing to get a better balance between your lead and the backing.
From a sharing perspective, I edited your post so the video is now embedded. You can see what I did below. Note I placed the spaces in the URL for clarity. Obviously you leave those out.
Yours: https:// youtu.be / Yu45a7eogzs
Mine: https:// www.youtube.com / watch?v=Yu45a7eogzs
Ahh makes sense. Thank you for your feedback, David!