Adi, I spent quite a few hours thinking how to phrase my feedback on this. Especially because I extremely rarely turn on the computer these days → barely comment on anything on here.
So I decided to split this comment into two parts with the addition disclaimer in the beginning .
Disclaimer:
All feedback below comes from someone who is currently so stuck and rusty with guitar playing that could not deliver a 10% of what you’ve done here. But also keep in mind it comes from the heart and I really have the best intentions (+ after Clint recently pointed out someone’s comment as potentially soul crushing, I try to make sure there’s no misunderstandings).
PART 1 (technique):
You nailed it. It’s very clear you put loads of practice into this. Yes, as you said there was a few hiccups but they didn’t take away the greatness of your playing. I can definitely believe you tried to record this a million times and always make a mistake at a different point in the song! Also, I was not aware you can reach feedback with a pedal, so thank you for doing some research on the topic. Your amp + pedal settings are phenomenal. The tone is pretty much a Santana tone. Well done! 9/10 because you are a bit of a perfectionist so there’s always space to improve .
PART 2 (delivery):
Okay, let’s go. Here comes the harsh part…
Where are the emotions my friend? It’s a boring recording. Yes, the excution is perfect but does it make me feel anything deeper? Not really. There is no dynamic in the playing, no raw emotion. It’s mechanical. I understand, you’re playing to a backing track. You can’t interact with it and you can’t feed off of each other.
Fair, that’s very good you don’t think what is coming next. But do you “think” what it makes you feel? Are you trying to convey whatever you’re feeling in the moment or are you just focused on “please be good enough for the forum post”? When you listen to the original, how does it make you feel? And how would you express this in your playing?
Okay, that’s it. I said it now. Do not misunderstand this comment please. I think your playing is phenomenal and I admire your dedication for the craft of guitar playing, especially since you are also in a new job + refurbishing the house. So well done!
PS:
A bonus story since it’s on topic with your guitar choice. Everyone that ever played in a band with Slash says that the guy is obsessed with practice. He gets the Conspirators in the room before the tour and they rehearse 8 hours a day for about 4 weeks and only then go on the road. Apparently because this allows him to not worry about the notes/fingerings/technical delivery on stage but just focus on channeling the emotions through the playing. A bit esoteric and wishy-washy for some people, but I can believe that. But again, I am quite an emotional person by default.