Hi Tosh,
There really is no “bad member” is there? I mean we do what we can and at times life gets in the way of our best intentions.
I really like this song and I think you did it up right. Seemed to get better as you went. I guess it took some warming up? Nice tone on your guitar and you captured that well with the recording.
Keep up the good stuff and all the best to you!
LB