I’m not that great, just grade 3 guy tryna play what’s on his head. One day, I was just chillin’, waiting for my sister to text me and felt like this, I can’t really tell if it’s good or bad and need some feedback (nothing in specific). As justin said, if it sounds good, it is good. I think it sounds fine. But I wanted to hear other’s thoughts on this. Sorry for the poor quality, I had my phone near me and quickly recorded and just played; accidentally turned out fine.
Thank you,
Shreezn
Hello,
I think it sounds really nice. Good you can take this out of your head while waiting for someone. 
Cool Srijan, that is exactly how it happens sometimes music is like that, if you like it it is good cheers Hec
Has the vibe of a grunge song in the beginning
You keep circling around the main chord a lot, with an occassional move to a chord nearby.
Later on in the song you jump a little further chord wise, making it more interesting.
This is were the song slightly changes genre as well
I didn’t find it easy to follow the structure, perhaps check whether your sections have the same length and you could incorporate a bit of structure with sections sharing length etc.
Also, pour it in more of a “story”; with a buildup in the beginning, a different energy for “verses” and “chorus” and a real “end” to wrap it up.
Your song has no real “breathing points” and trying to keep up the pace as a listener with the continues repetitive strumming pattern can be experienced as a bit of a stressful annoiance because there are no “tension and release” mechanisms (only tension)
Putting some of those dynamics in it and pouring it in a (bit predictable) structure with equal lenghts will make it evolve into a real song.
Good luck!