I did this one before but kinda took it to the next level and tried some special effects and such!!! Not perfect by any means but was fun! Hope you enjoy as i did in making it!!!
Just Remastered it and kinda put a band aid on one drum part!!
Hey guys think i posted this one already but ill do it again Songs about raising awareness about addiction! Enjoy! All comments appreciated!
Heres the lyrics if anyone is wondering!!!
Thanks Silvia glad you liked it!!! Thanks for commenting!
(Verse 1)
Im goin down to the bottom of the lakeā¦
Now I cannot escapeā¦
I went through alot of painā¦
Now I feel ashamedā¦
(Chorus 1)
Now i cannot stop on a dime
There was a time where I shined
Where I shined
Where I shined
(LEAD 1) Doo diddle dooā¦ doo doddle doo.ā¦
(Verse 2)
Im goin down to the bottom of the lakeā¦
That was one big mistakeā¦
I went through alot of painā¦
And its not some kinda gameā¦
(Chorus 2)
Now I cannot stop on a dimeā¦
There was a time where I shinedā¦
Where I shinedā¦
Where I shinedā¦
Now I cannot stop on a dimeā¦
There was a time where I shinedā¦
Where I shinedā¦
Where I shinedā¦
(LEAD 2 into FINISH)ā¦ Doo diddle dooā¦ doo doddle doo.ā¦
Bravo Bytron, itās really a good songā¦Iām afraid my poor listening skills made me understand only half of itā¦but the music came through entirely!
@CT@SDKissFan@sairfingers@glpguitar@Silvia80@TheCluelessLuthier@twistor59@beejay56 Wow thanks you guys! That means alot as ive been a addict before and know how it feels and this song I wrote portrays that and what it feels likeā¦ And it could be with anything in general! I still struggle to this dayā¦ Anywaysā¦ Listen to CTās collab that he did, its awesome! He did that when I first wrote this song! He posted the link in this post!!! Check it out!!! Then I re-recorded it with my new equipment that i saved for. Thanks you guys for acknowledging that it has a strong messageā¦ That means alot to me and what im trying to portray in this original. You guys mention Oasis, Neil Young and REM, and im a really big fan of those bands/artistsā¦ Even Nirvana! I love grunge rock and was trying to get close to that. Thanks you guys!
It truly was a great message, Bytron. Your original was impressive. Iām mostly not into hard rock, but this type of āgrungeā rock, I do enjoy. @CT ās collaboration was exceptional too. So nice to listen to.
Hi Byron, thanks for the Lyrics! I could appreciate it even moreā¦boy youāve got a talent with musicā¦ah yes I know, you worked hard too! So keep working hard on your talent and yourself because the results are something you can be very proud of!
Hi Byron, that is a lovely song, very well played and sung! I love the lyrics and all the layers - very nice addition of that melody part in the middle, works nicely with the song.