Completely agree with your critique JK. I wasn’t fully committed to it too be honest and I’ve deviated away from the original despite feedback from others. I could be wrong but I’m comfortable with my choice. For right or wrong …
Thanks for the feedback Digger. You may be onto something there. I’ve deviated away from the original arrangement for the moment though
Really interesting comment. The Bridge was calling me all the time. I couldn’t get what I was doing to fit and I didn’t want to shoe horn in something just for the sake of it. It needed a purpose and my limited compositional skills fell short.
It would have been good to have someone to collaborate with at that point