Hi David. Too bad you missed the MTV video boom 20 odd years ago. You could have cashed in! Multiple cameras, creating your own drum track, multiple guitar tracks, all sorts of wires into all sorts of devices. Wow.
And to top it off, it sounded great. I know how difficult it is to create something ‘listenable’ when jamming to a backing track and that was certainly listenable.
I’m not in a position to offer critique other that to say perhaps try to get it all a bit ‘looser’. Easier said than done when you’re concentrating hard.
I’d send you one of those love heart things but people might start to talk. Vibes were much more manly.