You - Original

A poem I wrote at the start of the summer and put to music yesterday.

I thought a few vids taken over the summer with be appropriate to accompany the same.
Did two different guitar voicings myself and got a friend to record some bass last night

This is it…

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Hi Dom!
Another splendid original!!!
Before even tapping on your posts I know it’s going to be something delightful - you didn’t disappoint with this one!!!
I really enjoyed “You”!
Thanks for sharing!

Tod

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Thanks Tod. I like the sentiment. I think I sound a bit whinny though :rofl:

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HaHaHa!!!
Not “whinny”… just in touch with your feminine self, maybe :sweat_smile:!!!
Us “secure” males can be that way!!!

Tod

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You said it sister :joy:

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Very nice, Dom :grinning_face_with_big_eyes:
This has a very different to it than most of your sensitive/fingerpicked songs.
I like the pumping acoustic, driving the repetitve I’ll be’s along :smiling_face_with_sunglasses:
Was all the footage taken in Kerry?

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Well Brian,.

Nothing wrong with the three chord trick. Actually I find it harder to compose anything I like with just three chords.

Mostly Kerry. Waterford, Tipperary, Carlow, Kildare also.

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Good stuff Dom, I agree, I found the nature of the pattern quite captivating. Had my attention nicely :+1:

Hi Dom,

Nice and I like it with that guitar that keeps pumping … also very nice that you included your own video footage. :grinning_face_with_big_eyes:
Catchy song that holds my attention :smiling_face_with_sunglasses: :clap:

Greetings

Thoroughly enjoyed that Dom. Great sound and loved that driving rhythm. Didn’t sound at all whinny to me. Now I am not a huge fan, so may mis the mark, but sounded quite U2-like to me, in a good way. Enjoyed the video footage just as much.

Great tune Dom. That was terrific mate.
One of the best originals Ive ever heard on here.

Tight, melodic, engaging, lyrical.
This song wouldnt be out of place on any platform, at any level.

Cheers, Shane

Outstanding Dom, just catching up on some posts after a week away and this was the first one that caught my eye. Superb stuff all around… Love the video as well!

Great original song Dom, thank you for sharing.

So much enjoyable to listen to Dom and really well produced! Also I enjoyed the videos…only as a non native english speaker I would have liked to read the lyrics .

Cracking tune! Although i had to listen a 2nd time as i was distracted watching the videos! As others have said - great rhythm.