In the spirit of Christmas Iām learning Love is All Around. But thereās one line thatās just awful; it sounds like something Spinal Tap would have come up with.
you know I love you, I always will
ā My minds made up by the way that I feel ā
Thereās no beginning thereāll be no end
'Cos on my love, you can depend
What would be an improvement for that second line?
Edit: Today and tomorrow forever still?
PS The lesson for this is sort of funny. Justin forgets how the song goes about half way through and recommends just figuring it out
you know I love you, I always will But when we mee up, youāve got no chill So please, Iām begging, when will it end? Canāt we just be āhorizontal friendsā?
Written by the Troggs, in 1966 or ā67 at a guess, (I know I was in primary school at the time) ā¦ then covered by every man/woman and their dog over the decades ā¦ and 45+yrs later you want to change the chuffinā lyric ā¦ ffs ā¦
One for the algos, I guess ā¦ and good luck with that ā¦
If it was one of your originals Iād try and help but why rewrite what has become a classic and yes I was around for the original by the Troggs. If you donāt feel it donāt sing it. It would be like asking for advice to change
Iām with @brianlarsen here in that I would probably just chuck all the words and start over This song is definitely not my lyric style, but if you really canāt bring yourself to sing that line, how about something like:
āYou bring me to my knees, make the world stand stillā
Might be too many syllables, but you get the point.