Hey man… sounds good! I have to say I have never heard this song before but I dig it and I just watched the band perform it as a result of your video. Your recording is great. I am very interested to know your setup (microphones, camera, software, etc.). I think your guitar playing is actually pretty good and on par with what the song is going to require to sound good. Your rhythm is quite good and you are driving the beat well with your strumming. Yeah there are a few mistakes here and there in the changes that you will clean up with time. I would consider trying to figure out how to mute the lower strings on some of the chords as those are ringing out quite obviously in sections. You have a good voice. Don’t be afraid to stretch it and really go after the dynamics of the song. The choruses (especially the last one) want to be nearly screamed and I think finding that edge is important to the integrity of the song. Finally… this is purely a technical thing… I think the intonation of your guitar may be a bit off. It sounds like some chords are coming through pretty well while others are a bit wonky. Intonation can be a real pain to deal with on Teles with the double string saddles but it is worth spending some time on it.