Danyaal,
The song sounds good. I generally liked the arrangement.
A pleasing build in dynamics into the chorus. Perhaps the arrangement could go even softer/more minimal in the post-chorus?
From a mix perspective, my preference would be to lift the level of the vocal a few dB, I think it was somewhat over-powered by the instruments. But that is highly subjective and dependent on what you were aiming for overall.
I notice the master level for the YT release is 4.5dB over their norm. If not aware of that you can read this post I wrote about it.
Look forward to next month’s release.