Lot to Lose

Here is a new song I was playing around with and decided to make a recording. Let me know what you think…

Lot to Lose

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Very nice song David. Well written, catchy and well performed :+1::+1::+1:

Very simple song and lyrics… but kinda fun to play and sing.

Cool mate nicely played :+1:

David

A good song with some good strumming. A greater change in chord sequence, or strumming pattern or vocal speed might help to create a clearer verse, bridge, chorus, dynamic to the song. Well played.

Brian

Nicely done David, I particularly like the applause :rofl: :+1: I need some of that on my songs :grin:

Ha ha. This was a song I was having fun with and trying a bunch of stuff. I had a second guitar part that I took out but may re try.

Hey David,
very well done! :sunglasses:

I like the song as it is,
While in general, beejay56 made a good point to to provide a bit more contrast between verse and chorus in order to set both apart from another.
After all - the great thing is - it’s your song and you should just do whatever you feel…

Now that I heard a few songs of you, I had to think that your voice is reminding me of Brian Ferry. Probably a cover would well work for you!

Thanks Dom!! i never thought of Bryan Ferry covers…will look into that…
I appreciate all the comments on songs, and ideas to improve writing in the future. Song writing is new to me, and I enjoy sharing songs here and look forward to posting more this year.

Enjoyed the song, David, well performed and produced