Shane,
I really enjoyed this one. Just the title caught my eye and I had to check it out. Glad I did! Really nice job on this… Your guitar tone to me for the most part was great. Maybe could have used a bit more gusto in the lead solo area… But all in all, great performance!
I did not read all the comments above, but if no one pointed out Chris Liepe to you as a coach for singing help and improvement. Do check him out. He has a ton of free stuff and even his pay stuff is very reasonable in cost! If you check his costs out vs local voice lessons, it is a bargain. He to me is almost like a Justinguitar of singing. But don’t take that to mean you did not do a good job as I thought your vox was well suited to this song!
All the best and be well,
LB