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:clap: :clap: I really enjoyed that Brian!

The ping pong ball percussion effect was really interesting and very creative. I also really enjoyed the bridge section. As others have said, you definitely have a talent for lyrics!

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:clap::clap::clap: that was very enjoyable Brian! :thinking:ā€¦noā€¦I donā€™t think I have anything else to say exceptā€¦I need one of those super cool drumming machine :smiley:

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That was nice, Brian. The ping-pong thing gave it a special drive and I like those ā€œsparklingā€ chords very much as a contrast to the catchy rhythm element of the ping-pong machine. Enjoyed it very much! :+1:t3:

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Hi @NicoleKKB , thanks for the listen and encouragement :smiley:
You can never have enough icing on a cake!

@twistor59 Haha, my drum-programming friend.
Yes I had to slow down and mute for the ā€˜low bridgeā€™
Serendipity had it though, that my song finished at the same time as the video, so I didnā€™t even have to go into ā€˜loop modeā€™ :laughing:

Thanks Mank @TheCluelessLuthier . Drummers are often the bane of the band, although Iā€™ve been lucky to have a brother who can provide a beat when required

Aw thanks @Mari63 . The good book is a treasure trove of artistic material- Good, bad and ugly :smiley:

Hey @jkahn thank you very much. High compliment acknowledged and appreciated! :open_mouth:
I do sometimes feel that my ā€˜artistic giftā€™ lies mainly in identifying things l like (and sometimes combining them with other stuff)

@Silvia80 mille grazie :smiley:
Soon weā€™ll all be able to say: ā€œAlexa put a cool drumbeat to my crappy songā€¦ā€ and it will be good.

Vielen Dank Andrea @Helen0609
Haha, I think what you describe as ā€˜sparkling chordsā€™ is simply poor hammer-on technique with a bit of fret buzz :rofl:
Thereā€™s only alternate bass plucking and muted hits. Still, Daddy says if it sounds goodā€¦ :wink:

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:joy: just wanted to emphazise the glamorous aspect of our performance :wink:, now youā€™ve blown the stardust awayā€¦ and yes, it sounds gooood!

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Brilliant! :smile: :sunglasses: very cool, catchy and creative. I love it!
Great lyrics and I love the ping pong percussion too :joy:

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Aw thanks, Jasmine. Thatā€™s lovely. Much appreciated :sunflower:

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That was brilliant, Brian. :clap:

You have a creative mastermind and Iā€™m a little bit jealous. :smiley: You made music out of a (weird, but somehow very cool) video of some ping pong ball rhythm machine. Thatā€™s just great. Liked the guitar part, sounded good and fits the tune perfectly. Lyrics also really cool. Yes, I still go for brilliant and I donā€™t care if itā€™s partially inspired by others (I think, thatā€™s how this whole arts and music thing works anyhow).

Thanks for sharing! :slight_smile:

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Vielen Dank Lisa :smiley:
We all look at aspects of othersā€™ musical journeys through green eyes.
Youā€™re on the right path- Practicing your instrument, using it to create meaningful stuff and willing to share it with others. I find it quite liberating to try something ā€˜differentā€™ and not to be too worried about looking foolish :laughing:

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Hi Brian, that was great, I got an old school TV theme tune feeling from it. You are a lyrical genus, definitely no plagiarism, just inspiration. For the percussion did you steal Enrique Iglesias ping pong machine? Very cool and super entertaining indeed.

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Fine fine work Brian!! That percussion, both sound and video, is mental in the best possible way! A very moody feel to this one and the slightly more subtle singing tone suits you well. Inspring all around!

Make sure you get some royalties from Lieven :wink: :rofl:

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@Socio & @Notter Ta to the both of you for the listen and kind words of support.
Much appreciated :pray: :smiley:
Gearing up for a big musical weekend now :open_mouth:

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Brian, hello my friend! In my opinion, this is perhaps one of the best things Iā€™ve seen from your work :slight_smile: You never cease to amaze me with your resourcefulness and unusual approaches to creating such musical masterpieces!

Mike

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Aw, thatā€™s such a nice thing to say, Mike :smiley:
The generosity of fellow musicians always astounds me, especially of those who are much farther down this path than I.
Š±Š¾Š»ŃŒŃˆŠ¾Šµ сŠæŠ°ŃŠøŠ±Š¾ :pray:

Are we in for a treat in the collaboration section of the forum when the weekend is over?

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Indeed there was a bit of ā€˜collaborationā€™ on the night.
Iā€™m trying to track down audio/visual footage that may have been taken, and if successful, will post it here :smiley:

Wow that was very different

Cheers mate.
I take ā€˜differentā€™ as a big compliment :pray: :laughing:

Yea man that was so good and the thought process that went into that is way above my intelligence. So yea take that as great job

@brianlarsen
Well, Brian, youā€™ve made your lace out of words, music and ping pong balls!
I am amazed and delighted :clap:
However, for this, as a non-native English speaker, I had to deal with your references to primary sources in order to understand the deep meaning and appreciate the wordplay. Well, at least I saw how Colditz looks in the picture these days - a very pretty castle :smile:
What else I want to say: you are very good at songs in the musical style of minimalism, really :+1:
And in general, the overall score of this hit is 12 out of 10.
Leo