Yea man that was so good and the thought process that went into that is way above my intelligence. So yea take that as great job
@brianlarsen
Well, Brian, youāve made your lace out of words, music and ping pong balls!
I am amazed and delighted 
However, for this, as a non-native English speaker, I had to deal with your references to primary sources in order to understand the deep meaning and appreciate the wordplay. Well, at least I saw how Colditz looks in the picture these days - a very pretty castle 
What else I want to say: you are very good at songs in the musical style of minimalism, really 
And in general, the overall score of this hit is 12 out of 10.
Leo
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Great minds and all that, Brian! Only the most astute among us would think to compare life to table-top games, so thatās you, me, and the creator of Monopoly so far. 
Not sure you could put my comparison to a tuneā¦ I had a scan through my other on-theme stuff and all of it gets a bit swearyā¦ also, thank you for checking out my poetry. Itās of iffy quality but Iām learning stuff now so hopefully it only gets better!
Anyway, I loved it your song, havenāt heard the tune you borrowed before, and a very interesting visual you stumbled upon (do wonder how the algorithm picked that one out for you), it was quite satisfying as the percussion. Puts me in mind of a youtuber who does covers of songs with electronic devices (printers and electric toothbrushes and so on.) Thanks for sharing it with me!