Hey, hey, Gordon!! So good to see you back with your one-takes.
I’m not one to tell you how to improve, (even though we both may have arrived on this forum around the same timeframe and have learned about the same). However, you can critique me, next time I post something 
So for that, I say I was so excited to hear/see you playing and singing again. Great riffs IMO! I love your stage presence. You are a 
in my book!